07:23 Sep 20, 2011 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Poetry & Literature | |||||||
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| Selected response from: David Hollywood Local time: 20:56 | ||||||
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5 +12 | yes |
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3 -1 | no need |
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no need Explanation: of 2nd comma |
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yes Explanation: absolutely -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 6 mins (2011-09-20 07:30:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- you have to put a comma as "or has that" functions as a relative clause -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 16 mins (2011-09-20 07:40:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- a (main cluase), explanation, etc. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 22 mins (2011-09-20 07:46:03 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- relative to the main clause -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 25 mins (2011-09-20 07:48:58 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- in apposition (better) |
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